ahaha
nice job. this is funny.
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nice job. this is funny.
haha thanx
This is
Dude, I'll be honest with yah.
this is good, keep it up.
5/5
10/10
- DofS
thank you dofs im currently working on my next project.
maybe we can colab one day.
Good man.
Good music comes out beautiful like this piece when time is spent on it.
Thanks man, I appreciate the review.
good
Sick melodies man, but I find the clap needs to be a little louder but thats just me. keep it up.
Thanks man.
Good first try
I suggest to keep a sustainable melody, and a bass line.
I thought the melody was solid, but the basslin is only ok, this i know :P Thanks for the review man.
good.
this is good man. this would good for a theme for a show or something.
Never really thought about it like that! but you are right. Thanks
Dang man.
this is hot
Thanks man! just searching for that #1 spot man! i want best of teh week dammit! i AINT GONNA STop! HAHA! ty for the review!
Poetic
Very deep man. keep it up.
thanks=D glad u like it as much as i do=D
very well done.
i like this. i hope to hear you do "Jack's lament" next.
lolz good idea!
Hey man.
I'll give yeah my honesty, so you can become better. I see potiential in you man. My suggestion in general is to add more melodies to accompany the main one. As for the main melody, elaborate on it, like make variations of it, of not the same thing over and over but hey man, you're own kind of hip hop.
I dig the drums in this, they're good man.
- DofS -
I know my songs may get a little bit repetitive, I still gotta work on making variations.
Thanks for the review.